However this is majorly let down by an utterly awful performance by Will Freeman. He completely hams every moment he is on screen and it's a shame because you can tell there is an attempt to make something ok. The writing is hokey in places but not sure if that's just the bad acting or what.
For a short film, it certainly had its head scratching moments which I don't want to spoil but there were multiple times where I felt like the drama was sucked out of it by very easy to fix problems. First and foremost though, fire that actor. I also saw him in a terrible feature a while back. Quit buddy, you got no talent.
Its a shame, could have been decent.