I enjoyed the pilot and the author's book. For this episode, the main plot seemed fraught with forced coincidences and oddball actions. Such things kick me out of suspended disbelief, ruining my enjoyment of the show. While the pilot is based on the author's book, I didn't read a book with this plot.
---Spoilers---
In the primary plot, Will & Faith are dispatched to investigate a murder at a "haunted" lake. Other than Faith being uncomfortable once, nothing more is made of the "haunted" status.
Faith's personal vehicle blows a tire and she's already running on the spare. The scene establishes that Faith has 2 phones but uses one exclusively for her son. (What? Why?)
Car is towed to garage that is run by a conspiracy theorist (Otis).
Murder scene is investigated. A bloody nail is bagged & tagged. The nail was secure enough to bloody the unsub as he ran by yet Will pulled it from the post easily??? Some might also wonder why there is a random nail in a post of a nice dock.
Back at the station we discover that the unsub is a serial killer related to a family murdered in their car 20 years ago. The sheriff of that time, who is now demented, did not investigate. The Captain (Amanda) puts herself on the case.
The Captain is getting a beverage at in town. Comes out to a jerk using the hood of his double-parked truck as a picnic table. Oops. It isn't his double-parked truck, it is her personal vehicle. Why is she being a double-parking jerk?
The team goes to a reporter's house to look at ~evidence from cold case. The evidence is in boxes outside. (???) Find a picture linking the murdered family with two current victims, Otis, and someone in a basketball jersey. (Also, are there any Georgians out there that say "Would you like a cup of iced tea"?)
Team, with local deputy, goes to Otis' house. His "sovereign" self gets agitated and threatens team with a shotgun. Deputy shoots him dead.
Will learns the bloody nail is missing and that Otis' garage is used as evidence storage.
Will & Captain go to Otis' garage/ evidence lock-up and find the car in which the family was murdered. (I'm not sure what that says about Otis...)
Faith & Deputy take the picture to the demented former sheriff to identify 4th suspect. (Is there no-one else to take it to? What about the reporter that gave it to them in the first place?) Shock! It's his son, "Chip"! Also, there was a baby in the car that wasn't murdered!
Deputy goes into store while Faith updates Will & Captain. She manages to spray a clear soda all over herself. Instead of going into the store to clean up, she looks into the glove compartment for a "bleach pen". (Why?) In the glove box is the bloody nail! Faith deduces that the deputy is the orphan & killer! (Why would a deputy-killer leave evidence in her glove box?) We pan up to see the deputy drawing on Faith; ordering her to dump her phone.
We jump to the middle of a bridge with Deputy, Faith, & Chip standing together by Deputy's personal vehicle. (Why a bridge??? Why not a meaningful place like where the family was murdered or some other secluded place?)
Will & Captain track Faith's second phone. They block the ends of the bridge with squad cars; their lights flashing. Then walk up to the deputy-killer, surprising her!?!?!!! <- this is where I lost the will to continue watching.
I came back later... Deputy jumps off the bridge without killing the last murderer.
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