I really like this show, but it suffers from serious problems in writing, plot, story, and character development Both with villains and hero's. The animation is also a bit 90's like family guy mixed with Archer.
The whole show just lacks clear focus, and a "mystery," that really isn't a mystery at all because you know what omniman did Immediately, it becomes about "why." Why was Great, but it took 7-8 episodes to figure this out, and tells me a problem. The Entire show revolves around this last 1.5 episodes, with the rest being filler per say. It feels like, to me, that the Entire Show was literally Written around this final confrontation, and I am not sure if the series continues it will get better, because of random villains with little backstory, random hero's with little backstory, incompetent "new" globe protectors that get beaten to Death against low-level Random villains, and so on. The show is not about 1 villain, but about Dozens that are not expanded on At All.
There Is No story whatsoever, just the main protagonist/antagonist Omni-Man and a bunch of underdeveloped characters that Literally Did Nothing at the end. They even said "we need to stay here because that's what we were told." What? That makes No sense, as just 1 episode ago they got Beaten To Death by lesser villains. And Who Was Metalhead or whatever? Who was the white tiger guy? Who Left by the way, after basically saying these hero's were pathetic (he's not wrong) and Not Worth killing.
So what should the future episodes do? Focus on a Specific enemy that is the main bad guy they are trying to defeat, with side villains that Support the Main villain. Like Joker using 2-face to distract Batman while the Riddler and Joker Trap Batman in some elaborate trap. Invincible, the show, has no strongly developed bad guy Other than the Viltrumites (that are impossible currently to defeat, as in 0% chance of winning). The series needs Strong villains that are addressed in-depth, characters that are not just braty teenage kids the Teen Titans could defeat with ease (meaning why Should we care that they Could win, which they can't), and Less Archer-style dialogue that mostly means nothing but filler to get to the next camera angle.
It had an Amazing ending, the latest 1.5 episodes were strong, made sense, well addressed, looked good, and had emotional impact that people could take seriously and remember; But, a lack of focus and no clear way of prolonging a series with sun-par hero's that are useless (especially duplicate like really guys, really?) with a 0% chance of defeating the Viltrumites conventionally. Invincible, the kid, is 10000 years undertrained and the Only way he could even Compete is with insane Plot Armor that makes Mark look like John Connor.
Edit: after watching it again multiple times since my review and picking up on more of the subtler details, I'm still affirmed that the Entire Show, as in 1-8, has enough filler and lack of establishment (in that every villain is only briefly addressed over 15-30 minutes each and then never again) to warrant a solid 7... However, that last 2-episodes, since the arrival of the immortal in 7 to the sad music-montage in 8, is Perfect, certainly up until before the medical scene montage. That approximately 40 minutes is sheer Cinematic Gold. It's perfect, and the Only thing it could do better is with higher FPS and animation quality, but the story, plot, cinematography, fight scenes, impact, Characterization, Framing, Voice acting from Omniman, and that Flashback Are Perfect. It is just a truly beautiful scene and it Really Shows the Brilliant writing potential that Kirkman Has. It's so good it's worth a full season watch Alone. It's much like the animated series Berserk 1997 in that the only thing it could improve are the frames of animation per second and more intelligent filler, of course written less like Teen Titans and more like Ghost in the Shell 1995.
The whole show just lacks clear focus, and a "mystery," that really isn't a mystery at all because you know what omniman did Immediately, it becomes about "why." Why was Great, but it took 7-8 episodes to figure this out, and tells me a problem. The Entire show revolves around this last 1.5 episodes, with the rest being filler per say. It feels like, to me, that the Entire Show was literally Written around this final confrontation, and I am not sure if the series continues it will get better, because of random villains with little backstory, random hero's with little backstory, incompetent "new" globe protectors that get beaten to Death against low-level Random villains, and so on. The show is not about 1 villain, but about Dozens that are not expanded on At All.
There Is No story whatsoever, just the main protagonist/antagonist Omni-Man and a bunch of underdeveloped characters that Literally Did Nothing at the end. They even said "we need to stay here because that's what we were told." What? That makes No sense, as just 1 episode ago they got Beaten To Death by lesser villains. And Who Was Metalhead or whatever? Who was the white tiger guy? Who Left by the way, after basically saying these hero's were pathetic (he's not wrong) and Not Worth killing.
So what should the future episodes do? Focus on a Specific enemy that is the main bad guy they are trying to defeat, with side villains that Support the Main villain. Like Joker using 2-face to distract Batman while the Riddler and Joker Trap Batman in some elaborate trap. Invincible, the show, has no strongly developed bad guy Other than the Viltrumites (that are impossible currently to defeat, as in 0% chance of winning). The series needs Strong villains that are addressed in-depth, characters that are not just braty teenage kids the Teen Titans could defeat with ease (meaning why Should we care that they Could win, which they can't), and Less Archer-style dialogue that mostly means nothing but filler to get to the next camera angle.
It had an Amazing ending, the latest 1.5 episodes were strong, made sense, well addressed, looked good, and had emotional impact that people could take seriously and remember; But, a lack of focus and no clear way of prolonging a series with sun-par hero's that are useless (especially duplicate like really guys, really?) with a 0% chance of defeating the Viltrumites conventionally. Invincible, the kid, is 10000 years undertrained and the Only way he could even Compete is with insane Plot Armor that makes Mark look like John Connor.
Edit: after watching it again multiple times since my review and picking up on more of the subtler details, I'm still affirmed that the Entire Show, as in 1-8, has enough filler and lack of establishment (in that every villain is only briefly addressed over 15-30 minutes each and then never again) to warrant a solid 7... However, that last 2-episodes, since the arrival of the immortal in 7 to the sad music-montage in 8, is Perfect, certainly up until before the medical scene montage. That approximately 40 minutes is sheer Cinematic Gold. It's perfect, and the Only thing it could do better is with higher FPS and animation quality, but the story, plot, cinematography, fight scenes, impact, Characterization, Framing, Voice acting from Omniman, and that Flashback Are Perfect. It is just a truly beautiful scene and it Really Shows the Brilliant writing potential that Kirkman Has. It's so good it's worth a full season watch Alone. It's much like the animated series Berserk 1997 in that the only thing it could improve are the frames of animation per second and more intelligent filler, of course written less like Teen Titans and more like Ghost in the Shell 1995.
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