It seems the writers for this show often seem to do everything they can to make the viewer aware of their methods of telling the story, often at the expense of the story itself. Almost like watching a film school project experimenting at times.
Instead what they probably should have focused more on was:
"How can we tell this story in a good way without the viewer getting unnecessarily distracted by those methods"?
That's what good story telling is all about in my opinion: Telling the story in a good way, without the reader/viewer/listener even realizing or reflecting upon what methods was used.
On this show they seem to do everything they can to instead make people focus more on the story telling techniques instead of the story.
* Weird and often insufficient lightning. * Extraordinary weird camera angels just for the sake of it. * Whispering, at times unintelligible, voices. * Unnecessarily frequent jumping in time and space without really adding quality to the story-telling * Hidden and vague messages and hints just to appear sophisticated, that doesn't really improve the story-telling. * Sometimes huge lags between the picture and the audio swap point between scenes. * In general they seem to think that all methods that usually work great in a book, can without alteration be implemented in a TV series.
The smoothness of the show is almost non-existent in some episodes (like this one). If viewers almost feel they need to have some sort of whiteboard where they write down all the scenes and then try make some sort of theory how the writers intended the viewer to interpret the fragments, preferably after re-watching a couple of time, it's a tremendously strong sign of a horrible writing technique, especially when it often turns out that the story itself was not complicated, only the story-telling itself was.
Now consider that there a lot of fans that seem to defend these methods no matter how bizarre they get and that the writers also seem to like that the story revolves around the story telling methods rather than the story itself.
Those factors combined unfortunately makes it very probable that this show will not ever get away from this unfortunate tendency of a bizarre self-admiration of the methods and "artistic twists" rather than focusing on the story itself which actually had quite a potential... :(
Instead what they probably should have focused more on was:
"How can we tell this story in a good way without the viewer getting unnecessarily distracted by those methods"?
That's what good story telling is all about in my opinion: Telling the story in a good way, without the reader/viewer/listener even realizing or reflecting upon what methods was used.
On this show they seem to do everything they can to instead make people focus more on the story telling techniques instead of the story.
* Weird and often insufficient lightning. * Extraordinary weird camera angels just for the sake of it. * Whispering, at times unintelligible, voices. * Unnecessarily frequent jumping in time and space without really adding quality to the story-telling * Hidden and vague messages and hints just to appear sophisticated, that doesn't really improve the story-telling. * Sometimes huge lags between the picture and the audio swap point between scenes. * In general they seem to think that all methods that usually work great in a book, can without alteration be implemented in a TV series.
The smoothness of the show is almost non-existent in some episodes (like this one). If viewers almost feel they need to have some sort of whiteboard where they write down all the scenes and then try make some sort of theory how the writers intended the viewer to interpret the fragments, preferably after re-watching a couple of time, it's a tremendously strong sign of a horrible writing technique, especially when it often turns out that the story itself was not complicated, only the story-telling itself was.
Now consider that there a lot of fans that seem to defend these methods no matter how bizarre they get and that the writers also seem to like that the story revolves around the story telling methods rather than the story itself.
Those factors combined unfortunately makes it very probable that this show will not ever get away from this unfortunate tendency of a bizarre self-admiration of the methods and "artistic twists" rather than focusing on the story itself which actually had quite a potential... :(
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