Just Got out of a Persian Version Screening.
It Runs Well for a while and then round about when it gets to the mothers backstory, the wind is completely taken out of the sails.
I was watching it and I thought to myself "ok, I see what the Filmakers are doing, but this is taking far too long " and that segment just brought the film to an absolute standstill(in my opinion).
I think the Structuring of this Film is All Out of Whack. In other words everything in the film is there but it's all out of order.
Another thing, that very ending execution, with the naming of the baby, that was not done Very well at all. It was sort of like "I'm calling the baby so and so" - "Why?" - "Ehh just because". Lol, that's it? Where's the execution of this very important moment? 🤷
Things I did like -
1. I loved the 4th wall Breaking with the Freezing of the background characters.
2. I really like the sometimes playful Tone of the film.
3. Some of the Comedy really worked well.
Overall, the Structuring of the Film Hinders the potential for a Well Delivered Film, and the Very ending Execution is not good.
It Runs Well for a while and then round about when it gets to the mothers backstory, the wind is completely taken out of the sails.
I was watching it and I thought to myself "ok, I see what the Filmakers are doing, but this is taking far too long " and that segment just brought the film to an absolute standstill(in my opinion).
I think the Structuring of this Film is All Out of Whack. In other words everything in the film is there but it's all out of order.
Another thing, that very ending execution, with the naming of the baby, that was not done Very well at all. It was sort of like "I'm calling the baby so and so" - "Why?" - "Ehh just because". Lol, that's it? Where's the execution of this very important moment? 🤷
Things I did like -
1. I loved the 4th wall Breaking with the Freezing of the background characters.
2. I really like the sometimes playful Tone of the film.
3. Some of the Comedy really worked well.
Overall, the Structuring of the Film Hinders the potential for a Well Delivered Film, and the Very ending Execution is not good.